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제목 Schedule 등록일 2026-02-05
내용 I woke up 1hour ago. I feel that I have not relived fatigue. Because I have worked 16 hours yesterday. ㅜㅜ
Anyway I will go to car repair shop. So I have to repair my car. One side of my car's front light was broken.
Fotunately shop is located near. I will shower right now. And then I am going to go shop. If I remain time after repair I will also goto exercise. See you later
담당강사 Anthony 등록일 2026-02-06
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I woke up an hour ago. I feel that I haven't relived myself out of my fatigue. Because I had worked for 16 hours yesterday. ㅜㅜ
Anyway, I will go to a car a shop to have my car fixed. One side of my car's front light was broken.
Fotunately the shop is located near my place. I will take a shower and then I'm going to the shop. If there is some time left, I will do exercise. See you later.

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