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제목 Today 등록일 2026-02-10
내용 I had a hollyday yester day.
Today, I'm working now. I feel tired now. Because I didn't sleep well last night.
But fortunately, I'm not busy work now.
I'm going to go to the hospital after work.
I have visited hospital for my skin nowadays.
I'm not sick. I'm just going for beauty purpose. Haha
I need to take care of myself. Because I'm old.
Thank you for reading my article. See you~
담당강사 Anthony 등록일 2026-02-10
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It was my dayoff yesterday.
Today, I'm working and I feel tired right now. Because I didn't sleep well last night.
Fortunately,  now I'm not busy.
I'm going to go to the hospital after work.
I have been visiting the hospital for my skin nowadays.
I'm not sick. I'm just going there for beauty purposes only. Haha
I need to take care of myself. Because I'm old.
Thank you for reading my article. See you~

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Nice to hear from you James. I was wondering why you put your class on HOLD yesterday. Now I know why. Thanks for writing to me again. Check out some of the corrections made and compare it to yours. smiley

I was planning NOT to go to word today. I lost some money and my laptop at home and I need to go to the police station. Someone entered my home last night while we were gone. I feel sad because I had to borrow money from my friend and my budget is ruined. My next salary is next month. I am just frustrated right now. 

See you laterheartsad

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