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제목 yesterday night 등록일 2026-02-25
내용 I watched movie yesterday night. Movie title is a man who live with king. The historical background of movie is 500years ago.
The plot is about tragic death of king who came into exile. um.. the movie is very sad. and i`m immersed story. The conclusion
is good movie. i reservated Krean style cooked pig feet after the movie is over. and then I stop by that store for pick up the food. i ate alone this food with Soju. So i filled very comfortable. Sometimes i think that need the alone time. Because the time is charging for me. I have to go exercise in a few minutes.see you sir~
담당강사 Anthony 등록일 2026-02-26
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I watched a movie last night. The title of the movie is 'A Man Who Live With A King'. The historical setting was 500 years ago.
The plot is about a tragic death of a king who came into exile. um.. the movie was very sad and an immersed story. The conclusion. it was a good movie. I reservated Krean style cooked pig feet after the movie. Then I stopped by that store to pick up the food. I ate alone with Soju. So i felt very comfortable. Sometimes I think I needed  alone time. Because time is charging for me. I have to exercise in a few minutes. See you sir~

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