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제목 E-mail writing practice 등록일 2026-04-28
내용 * I'm writing this as a practice (as you told me to try it)

To Heni,
I hope this e-mail finds you well.

Hello, I'm Sophia, the engineer from the ABC company.
I'm writing this e-mail to ask some information for produts which your company provides.

From the web page, It is said that machine A gives better operation for # than machine B.
Because operation for # is the one of those my company most cares, if you have more detailed catalog for them, can I ask to get it?

Thank you.
Best regard,
Sophia.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2026-04-28
첨삭 내용

* I'm writing this as a practice (as you told me to try it)

To Heni,
I hope this e-mail finds you well.

Hello,

I'm Sophia, the engineer from the ABC company.
I'm writing this e-mail to ask FOR some information for produts which your company provides.

From the web page, It is said that machine A gives better operation for # than machine B.
Because THE operation for # is  one of those my company cares most about. if you have A more  detailed catalog for them, (can I ask to get it?) Is it possible to send me a copy or May I please have a copy.

Thank you.


Best regardS,
Sophia.

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