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제목 About snacks 등록일 2026-04-29
내용 Dear Heni.

Hello!
Since I couldn't come up with business-related topics, instead, I would like to talk about snacks in my office.
In my office, my colleagues and I restock snacks whenever they run out.
Usually, we choose individually wrapped snacks (like cookies, energy bars, candies, mini chocolates, and so on) since they are convenient to eat and easy to keep. Recently, we restocked coconut cookies. They are crispy, sweet, and nutty.
However, it seems like it will run out soon, too.

So, can you give me some recommendations for office snacks?
Maybe I could search/buy some online! :D
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2026-04-29
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Dear Heni.

Hello!
(Since) I couldn't come up with business-related topics, instead, I would like to talk about snacks in my office.
In my office, my colleagues and I restock snacks whenever they run out.
Usually, we choose individually wrapped snacks (like cookies, energy bars, candies, mini chocolates, and so on) since they are convenient to eat and easy to keep. Recently, we restocked coconut cookies. They are crispy, sweet, and nutty.
However, it seems like THEY will run out soon, too.

So, can you give me some recommendations for office snacks?
Maybe I could search/buy some online! :D

 

 

Hi Sophia,

Hmmmmm... Let me think. Nuts, Popcorn, seeds, peanut butter or cheese crackers, tuna or salmon pouches, rice cakes, dried fruit, non-perishable protein drinks.I snack on "Lesser Evil" popcorn, "Power Crunch" and "Think" Protein bars, "Drizzilicious" rice cakes," "Like Air" popcorn, Lots of greek yogurt, Siete brand chips and Quest brand are good. My snacks are lower calorie because I have been on a diet. Hope this helps!

Heni

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